Mystique Love

The rains that fell on my life in the form of you,
Made a river out of the love which poured out of you,
Many a dreams of my night just became extinct,
The moment you touched, my inner soul in a way distinct.

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What is that you seek from me,
What is that I seek from thee,
And what is that we seek from ourselves,
Without an idea we flow like a river in a state of oneself.

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Do you know this state of mild intoxication,
To life it brings so much of wild satisfaction,
Never knew that falling in love with a clause,
Could bring my world to a state of mystical pause.

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All the darkness of mine brimmed up with your light,
The heart of mine filled up with seasons so bright,
Once again I moved like a deer, swiftly and lite,
Flew, high up in the ever blue sky like a kite.

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The window to my soul opened through your eyes,
The wind brought your scent from afar skies,
The twilights turned into never ending nights,
Lead to forbidden mysteries of silky delights.

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Author: anamikaisblogging

Uhmm! What do I say abt myself. Love to read, write, watch tons of movies and loves music. Educated enough to enlighten a few things to a few some who shows the interest to listen. This is me in a nutshell. Will let out little by little, like the cat out of the bag. Ok I think it's time to let out one more passion of mine, which I as much love as writing, and that is cooking. Trying out different new recipies with a slight variation added of mine makes my culinary skills a little adventurous cuisine.

68 thoughts on “Mystique Love”

    1. Thank you Joan…for dropping in and for such a delightful response which clearly stated what you liked about my work. So glad you enjoyed your first outing itself in my blog. Hope you enjoy the rest too. And may serenity and peace be on you too Joan….

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    1. Thank you so much for the appreciation Ramyani…You are a exemplary poetess yourself, I did have the pleasure to read a few. Glad to meet you in Chiru’s blog.
      Late hua tho kya hua…love is still in the air..so wish you a Happy Love Day…😁

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  1. Lovely Ana,

    Your poetry is a Mystique
    The love you expressed is a mystique

    I liked particularly…. “The rains that fell on my life in the form of you,
    Made a river out of the love which poured out of you” ….. I think this completes the rest of the desciption you gave…That is my feeling and opinion.

    This time I also noticed you enhanced the fragrance by those lovely rhyming words!

    And The finest poetical expression reaching its peak by these words
    “The window to my soul opened through your eyes,
    The wind brought your scent from afar skies

    Seriously I suggest you to take part in internationsal poetry compititions ( as a layman I guess there should be one such event )

    As time again not just me but our other friends also say that your poetry is mesmerizing and your photographs/paintings are a visual treat!
    Thank you for this post .

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    1. Thank you Sri…for this heart felt response of yours. You are being considerate enough in saying I am good. But i loved the way you specified what impressed you. I am delighted that you are enjoying poems now a.days…
      That is enough an award for me much more than any international poetry competition recognition… I value such straightforward …. heartfelt comments.
      I am honoured that you are always there to support and am happy to have you in my zone.
      Once again, I really appreciate your valuable response to this humble effort..and hope this time your eyes didn’t water as it was just love and it’s effect on someone I talked.

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    1. Am I? Well that is the most kindest thing you told..
      Well each time time we .end up thanking each other… don’t we, so let’s just decide upon..most gracious of you to say so, and hope and pray, all the hearts remain lighter tdy. Have a pleasant day Sri….

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  2. If l always praise u, ur poems will loose its value .
    U posted this on valentine’s day,
    Bt Im srry that I came late…
    The above two lines Sounds rhyming huh πŸ˜‚
    So Mai kya bol raha tha, ur poem touched my heart and ur words used made my brain to think.
    No more appreciating u, in one word this is sensational writing.
    I see when I first read ur poems, it was filled with more of sorrows and now it seems to change.
    You look happy again the kiss one is just brilliant, I had a smile on my face till the end of the poem. πŸ˜…

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    1. Haha…yes the first two lines did rhyme yaar. Tum kahi poetry shuru karne ki soch tho nahi rahe ho.
      Haan you are right initially it was melancholy, now it’s a bit cheerful ekdam hamare life ki tharah…ups and downs in our life. Just hope and pray this period lasts a little longer than I dare to hope.. .
      Thank you Anonymous for always the encouraging and kind words.
      And let your smile always remain forever.

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      1. Ab itne sare poets ke beech Mai toh 2 line Galti se ban hi sakti hai πŸ˜‚
        Hmm, u right about ups & down as the same happens to me everytime bt I know that you can make others smile, those who do it certainly get happiness as a reward.
        U r something different that can make everyone smile, as long as ur post in not Sad it will make me smile πŸ˜‰

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      2. Doing hahaha… when will u sleep??? Rebloged a NFS (need for sleep),&
        Now r u trying to break or touch Gardners record?
        Btw which brands coffee do u drink?
        Nescafe?

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