Oblivious Obvious Musings…

Oblivious Obvious Musings…

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If I am the voice, then you are my song,
A song I want to sing lifelong,
If you are the ocean, then I am the wave,
Hide me forever in your arms just like a babe.

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Over the bridge, I wait for those tender moment,
Like a Hornbill bird thirsts for the first rain,
Life with all it’s harshness, couldn’t my spirit drain,
The free spirit breeds in me still, may be a tad dorment.

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Somedays passed by, without much words,
Cause the language of silence cut across like a dart,
There are days, when I felt the burden of your heart,
Yet the presence mattered, inspite of the delicate loads.

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I look up and see the blue sky with twinkling stars,
And I wonder what fate has for me except these scars,
One thing I know, stories has an ending,
But in life, every ending is just a new beginning.

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So, here I go on just like a never ending song,
A song, I wish you would sing lifelong,
Entangled in a web, yet entwined within oneself,
Deep like an Ocean, hiding away the wave forever in itself.

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Author: anamikaisblogging

Uhmm! What do I say abt myself. Love to read, write, watch tons of movies and loves music. Educated enough to enlighten a few things to a few some who shows the interest to listen. This is me in a nutshell. Will let out little by little, like the cat out of the bag. Ok I think it's time to let out one more passion of mine, which I as much love as writing, and that is cooking. Trying out different new recipies with a slight variation added of mine makes my culinary skills a little adventurous cuisine.

53 thoughts on “Oblivious Obvious Musings…”

    1. Haha…thanks Unni…nothing to beat your rhyming sense of course. Glad …..the master of rhyming approved. Glad you picked your choice of the poem’s favourite part. It’s always encouraging for the writer, when the reader analyses the work and quote their favourite part.

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    1. You made the day Sri…from someone who ran away from poems, tdy enjoying them and getting emotional after reading one….what else could I ask for from a reader more than this moment you gave me. …. Appreciate this response from the bottom of my heart.

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      1. Thanks Ana,for your appreciation .
        But for your encouragement,I don’t think I would have dared even to have a glance at so many lovely poetry in many blog posts that I come across,,, because I always felt, both poet and poetess are intimidating because of the high proficiency and language control they possess.
        I am thankful to you.

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      2. Oh now! This is what i call as modestly… Sri, stop flattering me…you just needed a simple push and I am glad you gracefully adjusted to it and caught on pretty fast. Now I have a true and honest patron in you …..😁

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      3. Because bar bar I feel elated…. Kyon ki, you make me proud of my being able to understand the Greek and Latin which happens to be always in the form of poetry. Eh thoda complicated sentence ho gaya ! Chalo – my gut feeling is, you are making the poetry language simpler so that lesser mortals like me are able to really enjoy the fragrance.

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      4. Haha… Sri..you sure do know how to make someone float .. ..Aisa kuch nahi hein baba …my belief is.that unless and until someone understand what you write, how can they ever appreciate what you wrote. You write for an audience, right ? Then if they go blank after reading your exhibitionism of vocabularies you excel at, then whom are we writing for? So I believe in sticking to simplicity. ..
        And I believe you have found a new found freedom in understanding the hearts language ,which previously you were dumb at…πŸ˜‰.
        So feel elated and proud because you deserve it. This glorious moment totally belongs to you. Applause Sri….

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  1. I don’t like poems that much but this is fantastic, this one touches r heart from the start only. I don’t know ur story bt I definitely understand ur story. U have a very good talent of writing, those rhyming words make the poem sound like a song.
    Thanks for proving me right that u r a highly intelligent, kind & dedicated person…
    I admit that I really admire ur skills, please share hw to become like u. πŸ˜‰

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    1. Oh ,thank you Anonymous…. I am deeply touched and honoured by your response. I don’t knw how, I seriously have started to wonder how all the poem not liking people ending up becoming a poem admirers once they come to this blog. Believe me….you are definitely not the first to mention this.
      I am glad, time and again you are drawn back to this humble blog.
      May be just being helpful, and being kind whenever you can and caring and loving all…. can definitely make you more like me.😁. Thank you so much for the upliftment you gave. I totally appreciate it.

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      1. Yeah anyone can be attracted to ur writings bt don’t get honoured by my comment coz it is just a comment & u have something special… No I don’t think I can emulate u, u r way above me, I’m just a selfish person…😒
        I actually imagine those who r with u in real life would be really blessed…

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      2. Wish people who are close to me realise this…you knw people who are close to us has a tendency to take things for granted. That includes me too. I.take people who exist in my life to be taken for granted ….it’s human nature, i suppose.

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      3. Same here I also don’t really give the people the respect they deserve just bcoz they r close to us…
        I miss someone & today I know the value of that person😒
        This is one of the reasons I hate myself

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      4. I didn’t break anyone’s heart, I was just busy in other things that I couldn’t give time or anything πŸ˜₯
        Now I feel whatever I do is useless, it is better to spend time with the people who love me rather than concentrating on useless people & things 😒

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      5. Hmm. …lessons learned in a hard way I suppose….but lessons learned are experience gained. Now you know how to treat people close to you, which makes you a wise man indeed. Have a blessed day Anonymous.

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  2. This post, poem, is a spectacular example of writing that crosses all medium of writing anybody can write or there is in the literature in our world. With such ease and simplicity you could bring the whole world under the footsteps of the reader and also any person of any age can feel your words and the intensity of its meaning. This is a spectacular gem of a writing.

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