Oblivious Obvious Musings…
If I am the voice, then you are my song,
A song I want to sing lifelong,
If you are the ocean, then I am the wave,
Hide me forever in your arms just like a babe.
Over the bridge, I wait for those tender moment,
Like a Hornbill bird thirsts for the first rain,
Life with all it’s harshness, couldn’t my spirit drain,
The free spirit breeds in me still, may be a tad dorment.
Somedays passed by, without much words,
Cause the language of silence cut across like a dart,
There are days, when I felt the burden of your heart,
Yet the presence mattered, inspite of the delicate loads.
I look up and see the blue sky with twinkling stars,
And I wonder what fate has for me except these scars,
One thing I know, stories has an ending,
But in life, every ending is just a new beginning.
So, here I go on just like a never ending song,
A song, I wish you would sing lifelong,
Entangled in a web, yet entwined within oneself,
Deep like an Ocean, hiding away the wave forever in itself.
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For my Pencliff Friend’s…. Happy reading and Happy blogging 😃
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So lovely post it is
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Thank you much Tanusri Sen. Glad you liked this post. Welcome to Anamika’s blog.
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Wow wow wooooooow
“If you are the ocean, then I am the wave,
Hide me forever in your arms just like a babe”
I am enchanted by this masterpiece.
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Haha…thanks Unni…nothing to beat your rhyming sense of course. Glad …..the master of rhyming approved. Glad you picked your choice of the poem’s favourite part. It’s always encouraging for the writer, when the reader analyses the work and quote their favourite part.
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hehe
I am master of rhyme
but you are PhD of rhyme and imagery 🙂
I hope to publish that part-2 of scary night story.. typing may finish within 2 hours
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Haha…tum bi na Unni kamal karte ho…
Acha, so readers get to read what they were waiting for….Wow, cant wait to know what happens nxt….
Typing khatam karke jaldi post karo ….
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aye aye captain 🙂
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Haha…Disperse… and on duty with immediate effect ….😁
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My pleasure 😃
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Eyes becoming wet !
Anybody reading this post sure to get emotional !
Hi Ana,Wonderful poetry pouring out from the heart
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You made the day Sri…from someone who ran away from poems, tdy enjoying them and getting emotional after reading one….what else could I ask for from a reader more than this moment you gave me. …. Appreciate this response from the bottom of my heart.
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Thanks Ana,for your appreciation .
But for your encouragement,I don’t think I would have dared even to have a glance at so many lovely poetry in many blog posts that I come across,,, because I always felt, both poet and poetess are intimidating because of the high proficiency and language control they possess.
I am thankful to you.
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Oh now! This is what i call as modestly… Sri, stop flattering me…you just needed a simple push and I am glad you gracefully adjusted to it and caught on pretty fast. Now I have a true and honest patron in you …..😁
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Another thanks
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Offo phir se thanks…iss baar kyun?
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Because bar bar I feel elated…. Kyon ki, you make me proud of my being able to understand the Greek and Latin which happens to be always in the form of poetry. Eh thoda complicated sentence ho gaya ! Chalo – my gut feeling is, you are making the poetry language simpler so that lesser mortals like me are able to really enjoy the fragrance.
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Haha… Sri..you sure do know how to make someone float .. ..Aisa kuch nahi hein baba …my belief is.that unless and until someone understand what you write, how can they ever appreciate what you wrote. You write for an audience, right ? Then if they go blank after reading your exhibitionism of vocabularies you excel at, then whom are we writing for? So I believe in sticking to simplicity. ..
And I believe you have found a new found freedom in understanding the hearts language ,which previously you were dumb at…😉.
So feel elated and proud because you deserve it. This glorious moment totally belongs to you. Applause Sri….
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Wonderful imagery yar. Pictures k sath poems banana koi tumse seekhe…
And this is so touching… At your best as always…..
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Arre Janab… aap jaisa koyi support karne wala ho, tho ye khud pe khud ho jaatha hein….waise glad you found time to drop in … han touching and emotional tho hona hi tha, after all likka mann se na…
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Mann se likhne ka yahi parinaam hotha hai…
Keep it up..
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Tanq Chirpy…. Just keep supporting like how you do always…
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Just wowwwww😍😍😍
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Thank you so much Ashish….glad to see you after a while. Sab teek tho hein na? How is health ?
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Bsss aapkii duaaa h😇😇😇
Aap sunaao aapkaa kyaa haal h😛
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Arre my best wishes are always with you Ashish. I am doing good by Gods grace. Take care of yourself .
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You toooo😊😊😊
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Some beautiful lines and images, thank you.
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Thank you so much….Libre Paley….Glad you stopped to give such a positive response..
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Oyeeeeeee…….
I am jealous of you rhymes. I am never able to rhyme the pieces I write except for the poem we worked together on.😂😂
Lovely. Wonderful poem.
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Haha…tho what do you say ,you want to jam again, just to create something rhyme 😜 Btw.. when is your exams coming up? Thanks a ton Kudiye for dropping in with sugar …sugar, oh my Candy girl ..😁
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Beautiful
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Thank you so much Adhi…
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I don’t like poems that much but this is fantastic, this one touches r heart from the start only. I don’t know ur story bt I definitely understand ur story. U have a very good talent of writing, those rhyming words make the poem sound like a song.
Thanks for proving me right that u r a highly intelligent, kind & dedicated person…
I admit that I really admire ur skills, please share hw to become like u. 😉
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Oh ,thank you Anonymous…. I am deeply touched and honoured by your response. I don’t knw how, I seriously have started to wonder how all the poem not liking people ending up becoming a poem admirers once they come to this blog. Believe me….you are definitely not the first to mention this.
I am glad, time and again you are drawn back to this humble blog.
May be just being helpful, and being kind whenever you can and caring and loving all…. can definitely make you more like me.😁. Thank you so much for the upliftment you gave. I totally appreciate it.
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Yeah anyone can be attracted to ur writings bt don’t get honoured by my comment coz it is just a comment & u have something special… No I don’t think I can emulate u, u r way above me, I’m just a selfish person…😢
I actually imagine those who r with u in real life would be really blessed…
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Wish people who are close to me realise this…you knw people who are close to us has a tendency to take things for granted. That includes me too. I.take people who exist in my life to be taken for granted ….it’s human nature, i suppose.
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Same here I also don’t really give the people the respect they deserve just bcoz they r close to us…
I miss someone & today I know the value of that person😢
This is one of the reasons I hate myself
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Sometimes it takes a whack on our back to make us realise the value of life and people who matters to us. It’s easy to break someone’s heart but it’s difficult to win it back again.
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I didn’t break anyone’s heart, I was just busy in other things that I couldn’t give time or anything 😥
Now I feel whatever I do is useless, it is better to spend time with the people who love me rather than concentrating on useless people & things 😢
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Hmm. …lessons learned in a hard way I suppose….but lessons learned are experience gained. Now you know how to treat people close to you, which makes you a wise man indeed. Have a blessed day Anonymous.
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Reading the book after the final exams r over makes u just a foolish person. I’m nowhere wise bt u have a great day ahead 👍
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Uhmm …Ok
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wonderful words! thank you so much for following my blog, I have happily returned the compliment!
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Thank you so much for those wonderful words Malcolm Marsh. Hoping to see more of you here in Anamika’s blog. It was a pleasure to follow you.
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This post, poem, is a spectacular example of writing that crosses all medium of writing anybody can write or there is in the literature in our world. With such ease and simplicity you could bring the whole world under the footsteps of the reader and also any person of any age can feel your words and the intensity of its meaning. This is a spectacular gem of a writing.
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Thank you so much for such detailed explanation about what you felt after reading the poem. I am honoured dear…
Thanks much for the appreciation …
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Heartfelt write.. liked the poem as well as the pictures
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Haha…didn’t know you were here when I was there….Thank you Muntazir….for the appreciation.
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Lovely coincidence, right. The pleasure was mine
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Haan yaar..☺ Seriously …what a coincidence indeed. Take care Muntazir…
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You too
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Yup…I will.
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Such a beautiful poetry!!! Soft and tender feelings expressed so delicately ❤️
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Thank you much Deeksha for such a beautiful expression in response to my humble words….
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Come on Anam…
words flow very gently through you, really loved this one the most!!
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Some how I liked your flow of words in this response much better…😜
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Anam, you are gifted with creating magic. Don’t stop this any time.
God bless you girl !
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Thank you and Amen to your words…
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You have a beautiful writing style. I look forward to reading more of your poems in the near future.
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Thank you so much Athena, for your kind words. I am glad you enjoyed your visit. Looking forward to more such conversations.
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