Dear fellow bloggers and readers, this poem is a collaboration effort with a dear friend and author Alien Poet
This is our third attempt at a collaborative poem together, the first one ‘The bountiful nature ’, the second ‘A letter from the battlefield‘ being welcomed and received so well by all. This time the topic was decided as ‘Mutual Break up’. Mutual or not breakups are tough. We have tried to reflect the pain and agony both the parties involved, goes through, in this poem. Hope you readers will like this collaboration too.
Long LostLove….A mutual breakup.
Anamika:
When there is nothing else to say,
I knew I could not ask you to stay,
This break up has been emotional and long,
But, don’t feel sorry, for you know I am strong.
Alien Poet:
Fate never wins over us,
Won the hurdles that hindered,
Some write stories to live,
We lived to write a story,
That to recite to our grandchildren.
Anamika:
Deep inside, somewhere it still hurt,
I guess we both knew we are growing apart,
When days went without your text,
Somewhere we knew what was coming next.
Alien Poet:
Remember, we not expected a cut,
What I am left without a heart,
I want to live with those memories,
Till you take another birth,
Let’s get hurt much like a tattoo,
To write to the world that we loved.
Anamika:
You were my heart and soul,
You always, made me happy and whole,
All things good comes to an end,
Even the most precious gift God send.
So lovely it is to read yet sad, having bittersweet emotion.
You guys did an awesome job. A treat to read it. Kudos.
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Thank you so much Aquib from both AP and me for the appreciation. Yes brealups are bitter and we have tried to reflect how painful it is yet the acceptance that the relationship has reached it’s end makes the parting a bit less dramatic. Thank you for dropping by Aquib. Hope everything is good for you.
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thank you buddy
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You can feel the pain and agony in this post expressing heartbreak is not easy but you guys did it wonderfully great job.
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A big hearty thank you Shaikha from both AP and me for a perfect response. Yes we agree with you expressing breakups are painful but we have tried to express this feeling with as much sincerity as we can. Thank you for appreciating the effort.
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Fantastic poem
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Much thanks to you from AP and me….
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A beautiful play of words💐💐
Keep sharing😊
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thank you BA
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Thank you much from both of us. Glad you dropped in.
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Reblogged this on Alien Poet.
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Great to see the collaborative effort, kudos to the both authors. Good work Anamika.
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Hey Ragu…romba naal kalichu comment pannirukkinge. How are you doing Ragu? Thank you so much for the appreciating words friend……from both of us. Hope everything is going good for you …
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Hello Anamika, Everything going well. Yeah its been long. I regularly check the post from your blog, sometimes your posts are little long enough to scare me :p due to that i left those for future reads.
How are you doing Anamika. I wish everything fine 🙂
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Which long one scared you Ragu? Haha….doing good too. It’s been a while too since i dropped in.ur blog. …how is your published kavithai book doing ?
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i can’t remember the exact post Anamika.
I just launched the book in kindle, the number of readers are in small size, so getting the few positive reviews about book.
Hope you doing great in Anamika’s Blog 🙂
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Congratulations Ragu . Don’t worry, readers will increase steadily. ,ya everything is great in Anamika’s blog. You take care..
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Yeah sure Anamika 🙂 Thanks and take well care.
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U too Raghu…take care.
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Happy diwali Anamika 🙂 Have a great festival time.
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Hey Thanks…wish you a Happy Diwali too Raghu…..Enjoy the festival season of lights…..
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Painful but lovely
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Yes.painful but lovely… .Thank you Adhi…for the response ..Vazhkkayum appidi thaane. Painful yet lovely…illeya?
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Yeah true
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☺
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Painful and how can be lovely? 🙂 It’s always painful
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Oh ya the break is always painful she meant the poem wss lovely . .
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oh I see..
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Yeah that only
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☺
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Breakup is painful but brought out onto paper well. That’s y it’s good.
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Haha.. .yes true…
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understood
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Reblogged this on Pencliff and commented:
To dear Pencliff readers a small glimpse into a collaborative work by Alien Poet and Anamika. Happy reading and Happy blogging..😃
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You guys did an awesome work through collaboration.. One can feel the pain of after break up reading this post..
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Thank you Chiru from both AP amd Me. Glad you found the time to drop in. The topic credit truly goes to AP. We did try to bring out the real pain in a break up through this poem.
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Yes I could read the voices of both of you… Alien poet at his best.. Break up is never easy…
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Oh ya…AP always excel at what he does.. yes breakup was your topic too remember ? Kuch yaad aaya ?
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Yup I remembered it with each line when i started reading.. After break…
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Muje laga aap relate karenge. Lekin ye unka zidh tha ki ispe likhna hein.
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Haan kiya na..
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That’s awesome collab ❤
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Thanks much Meera from both of us….eppidi poyittirukku?
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Welcome sweetheart ❤ 🙂
Hamm.. good .. ena ma breakup poem lam.. everything fine?
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Haha…ninachen indha question varum nu. AP ye thaan kekkanum. The topic was his selection… avareye kelunge why breakup topic. Oru vela he has an answer 😉.
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Slow va thaan pokuthu..petrol kammiya irukkam haha 🙂
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naan thaan choose panninen…because ennoda Kaathalikal ellam ennai vitutu poitanga..rompa manasu odanju poyi iruken…antha virakthila thaan….oru girl namma kooda epadi senthu ipadi break up pathi eluthina epadi irukum nu nenachen…anamika done a good job…Thanks..so this title fully owned by me..she just acted what I asked to do..nandri Ana
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😁😁
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Kadhalikal aww plural 😐
Anyways that was a good collab 🙂
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athu veliya oru ponnu thaan ullukulaa pala penkal..anniyan maathiri..athaan KAAthalikal 😛 dank you dank you..
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mentaaly multiple, physically single disorder nu Nithyananda maathiri solvanga..:)
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Lol _/\_
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Painful breakup! Fantastic collaboration!!
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Thank you Megala ji from both of us…Glad you took the time to come by.
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Good poetry…😘😘
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Thank you so much Sydney from both AP and me.. great to see you here..☺
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Some| loves us. We care for the other Someone. That someone loves another Someone.
If you thought this has a happy ending, you haven’t been paying attention.
We often understimate the value of them who are easily available for us – All time.
Aren’t we ????…….
Actually this is a marvelous cycle of Love defoliation that spares none.
Pay attention to your Some| and your life will be a fairy tale.
Love isn’t a pit.
Love is a ladder. Many who try to climb it fail, and never get to try again. The fall breaks them. And some are given a chance to climb; they cling to the real or the gods or love.
Love resides where you believe it resides. It’s a trick; a shadow on the wall.
All good things do come to an end except Goodness preservered in our heart . Use this as a Projector and then
Thou shall See
Everything and Everyone is Marvellous in someway or other.
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Thanks much for your valuable comment from both of us Nagaraj ji.
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Both !!!!!
What do you mean
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This is a collab work by Alien Poet and me……so thanks from both means from both the writers…Clear?
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I feel this poem. This is very painful for me but a little smile on my face with lot’s of tears. Superbbbb Collaboration.
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Oh God! Making you emotional was not the part of the plan at all. But guess what if this poem has touched you that deep then hope we have conveyed the pain of a breakup with utmost sincerity. Thank you from both of us for such haunting words Ashish…Take care…
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Ab rulaaao gee kyaaa????
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Nahi…..nahi…iska tho bilkul bhi iraadha nahi hein Ashish…..
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Iraadhaa neek nii lg rhaa haai mujhee😜😜😜
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😁. Haha…Ye aapki ghalat phaymi hein..
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🙏🙏🙏🙏😂😂😂😂
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Law jawab mohtarma. Fida hi Ho Gaye hum toh.😂😂
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Aare…My dear Shreya…such a long time dear….Masha Allah aapne tho hamare dhil ko chu liya….Thank you so much from AP and me…Tho kya haal hein?
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Hum badiya. AAP kaise hain?😘😘
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Sab Badiya hein..😁
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As expected. Good good.😘
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I am in love with this beautiful creation full of feelings, emotions, details. A wonderful collaboration of two great bloggers 🙂
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Thank you so much Unni. Glad it reached out to you. A hearty Welcome ….😃.
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U both wrote beautifully
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Thank you so Goldie.. ..from AP and me…
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AP??? Means andhra pradesh
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Haha…AP iz the short form I call for Alien Poet. .😁
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Okies
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😁
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Thanks GB..
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Welcome g
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I liked the last stanza the best.
Well done, overall. To you and your collaborator.
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Thank you much for the appreciative words……glad you came by…
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Great write, painful indeed.<3
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Thank you Mam so much from both AP and me….so glad you visited…
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My pleasure.<3
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Very great Collab! Kudos to both of you! Keep sharing awesome work! Have a great day ☕
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Thank you from both of us Ravi ji. Your words are really encouraging and energetic enough to make us attempt more such collabs. You too have a nice day. Oh ya thanks for the coffee too.
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My pleasure always! Have a great Diwali week 🍫
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U 2 Ravi ji have a blasting week…
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This is really deep thoughts to be felt. Bringing emotions to words is a tough job. I could sense the emotions in your words. Great job Anamika and Alien writer ✌
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Thank you Vishnu…for your wonderful comments. Both of us appreciate your visit and response.. .Glad to know you felt the emotions we tried to portray…. Nandri…
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As always, your writing keeps me amazed. This collaboration is pain but nevertheless i read it to the end
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Hey, its been a long time Gideon. Thank you so much for the appreciation, it’s a collaborative effort Gideon…and Alien Poet has done a tremendous job too. Yes breakup can be painful and I am glad you read it till the end. Thank you once again
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Keep it up and kudos to Alien Poet, she writes awesomely
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Haha..Alien Poet is a he not she…but yes i will convey your appreciation to him.
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wow he writes well….thanks friend,does he own a blog too?
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Oh yes! Just click on his name in the introduction para above the poem. It straight takes you to his blog. He is a much senior blogger and has been blogging for many a good years now and has lots of post you might enjoy going through.
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Alright, i will do just that now
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An agonizing feeling there… You know Anamika and Sigmund, parting ways is like taking out shadow from one’s body…irresistible. The way you’ve wrote ‘Lets get hurt much like a tattoo’ omg that’s heart wrenching…literally gave me goosebumps..
You know I have a few friends with whom I need to have a talk eve day in-order to speak out my shit and listen to their life and there have been days where as you said there’s hardly a text and it’s so edgy and you just feel knocking their door and speaking it all out…brilliant as usual Anamika ji… aaise he roshni failate rahiye..
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Thank you so much Piyush…for such a well explained response. .‘Lets get hurt much like a tattoo’ …this line’s credit totally goes to AP. He very artistically wrote it. Yes some situations can be tough..and glad you have listening ears and you lend listening ears too for those in need. Glad you came by Piyush.
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Thanks guys..
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Its always a pleasure Anamika to read your work and the collaborations that you do. Always amazing.
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Thank you once again Piyush.
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Pleasureoo Anamika ji
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There is a typographic error in the spelling of second.
Anamika, you lines where great…
The other poet too… Only that you spoke in breakup terms, while he wasn’t sure of what goes next.. Lovely poem
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Thank you Vincent, for pointing out the error, rectified it. Thank you so much for your appreciation Vincent ….Both of us appreciate it Vincent ..
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*your lines were
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Lovely lines about heartbreak.. Beautifully penned the emotions of a a heart broken person…
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Thank you Priya for dropping in in spite of ur busy schedule …much appreciation from AP and me.
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Most Welcome Anna 🙂
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Collaboration. I am thrilled at the prospect
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Haha…thank you KJ for dropping in…
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Good morning Anna 😊
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That was very nice. Two different style, coming together to talk about separation. One heavy with forecast of hidden pain while other hurting but open to think about it in and as past experience. Two different generations of thoughts, one frank but festering and other hurting but in the learning curve.
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Wow…what a detailed analysis….you have taken the pain to go thru each writer’s wavelength of thinking. . Suoerb response. Thank you so much …
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Anamika, I guess you’re a hit among us. Wish you the best hits in life.
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Thank you for the encouragement . God willing dear…..with all your love and encouragement
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Nice!
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Hey ….John, how are you? Thank you from both the writers J-M. Hope u are doing good …
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Hi Anamika, I’m doing well. How about you?
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Great….John. How is.your father’s health now…….is he getting better?
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He’s better. He’s more mobile and can talk. But he’s still weak and has memory problems.
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Don’t worry John…he will be alright soon. Prayers work Miracles… trust Him. But glad he is much better…
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Amen!
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Yes Amen….
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Hello Anamika!
I have nominated you for the Sunshine Blogger Award. Do check it out: http://thesoultalks10.com/sunshine-blogger-award/
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Thank you Piyush…
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colaborations…so nice!
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Thank you from both of us…;
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Beautiful! I love how you guys wrote it together 🙂
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Thank you much. ..highly appreciated …
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Lovely poem Anamika, touched my soul. I too had a past with someone who shared the same name. Could relate to every word every painful pause. Kya baat hai!
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Thank you so much Pratik… So touched to hear that you could relate to it. Are you saying her name too is Anamika?
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Yes dear her name is Anamika; We so wanted to be together and I needed time however her parents wanted her not to waste it, waiting. Anyways you know what, she too took to writing after her marriage. She writes blogs. I do read them and the best part is we are still talking and in good terms. I am thankful to the almighty for this at least. Not every relationship ends on a good note and people often lose contact with each other as it is painful.
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Indeed it is a happy feeling to be still in touch with someone you loved so dearly. And it’s a blessing to be on a friendly terms too. Happy endings are not everyone I agree but we remain happy with each other is definitely in our hands. Appreciate the time you took to share your beautiful transition. May you remain happy and may God bless you always. Take care of yourself Pratik…
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