The Wild Breeze

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Like the winter sunshine, that warms my soul,
On a cold winter day, freezing frost and all,
Like the song of a cuckoo, one bright day morning,
Came the breeze, bringing you along without a warning.

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Nature suddenly bestowed with bright glowing splendor,
Is there anything as tranquil, I somehow wonder,
No one knows where this breeze came from,
Neither do they know where it goes, so calm.

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As I watch,Β  you change my approach,
Towards life and it’s fullness you coach,
Like a wild wind caressing the breeze,
Time stood still, in a time zone of wildness it froze.

Willingly and star gazed like a child I walked the path,
The wild wind leading the way, unmindful of the aftermath,
The sky seems so blue, the sunshine so bright,
You spread happiness with its blinding light.

 

Author: anamikaisblogging

Uhmm! What do I say abt myself. Love to read, write, watch tons of movies and loves music. Educated enough to enlighten a few things to a few some who shows the interest to listen. This is me in a nutshell. Will let out little by little, like the cat out of the bag. Ok I think it's time to let out one more passion of mine, which I as much love as writing, and that is cooking. Trying out different new recipies with a slight variation added of mine makes my culinary skills a little adventurous cuisine.

40 thoughts on “The Wild Breeze”

  1. The poem was as pleasant as fresh rain falling on the ground and the sweet cool breeze aftermath. Keep raining and give us further more pleasant weather.

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  2. such warm and beautiful words rendering amazingly πŸ˜› great lines n expression…I amazed the wild breeze would carry you along the brim of pleasure

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    1. If you read this poem doond nikalke…then that means u r home… Haha.. thanks yar for the encouraging words ☺ ..I hope I inspire you enough to write a kutti poem at least. First thing u shld understand is poem is a language of heart. Your mind thinks. But your heart just sings….that comes out as poems for some.. And probably I am one of those who listen to the heart’s language more than the mind’s. People might say it’s stupidity and not practical but i would rather be called a fool than a hypocrite pompous…
      Try tdy to listen to the song your heart sings and may be u will get to knw what I am saying.
      Ipo purinjidicha naan epidi ezhudharen nu.😁

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      1. Haan yar socha kuch dino se aapke blog ka darshan nahi huwa so thought to scrolling down..
        yes it’s kind of motivation but apple I m too bad at poem tat too with rhyming I m too lazy for it.. but I want to try once..
        Rightly said… mind thinks heart creates.
        πŸ™ŒπŸ™πŸ™

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      2. That’s kind of sweet of you….to come back.
        you write i will help.you to Polish it before you publish it. There is no compulsion that you have to rhyme it at all. There are so many who wrires without rhyming. Sometimes i have written without rhyming too
        So just try …i will help. May be initially 2 stanzas would do… Why don’t we try in this weekend. ..what do u say? Do u want me to choose a topic for u?

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      3. Haha….i liked the way said you have to think more softly. Ok let’s do it this weekend of urs. Iz that a deal.. ..i will guide you don’t worry…starting from helping you to choose the topic to write on.

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      4. Haha…ivalavum craze na you have it fully….nan yen pangayum vittukoduthitten. You can have it fully. I will help you with poem without any expectations….ok va. Aama innaku Thursday le uhmm weekend homework planning um irykku..As usual 2 thane. You have GOT to watch too

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      5. No no u asked for it na then its for you… just said. You know I never go on my own to buy sweets or ice cream for myself.. but jab khud aaatha hai i never leave a bit piece..
        That’s how i control my sugar level.

        Oh you never forget.. Waiting for your suggestion..GOT is slow and steady going on..

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