Lamentation of a Loner

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Missed out somehow from the flock,
Not a bit aware of the worldly clock,
Crying out it’s heart so loud,
Hope of getting heard far and around.

Not aware of it’s surrounding place,
The loner zoomed around it’s gaze,
The unknown place and territory,
The loner feared, he will soon be history.

Remembering the flock by night,
The loner, cried it’s heart out in fright,
Of missing it’s dear ones afar, now in foreign land,
The Lamentation of the loner dying down in an unknown sand.

Author: anamikaisblogging

Well... me... I love to read, write, binge watch tons of movies and series and enjoys good music. Educated enough to enlighten a few things to a few some who shows the interest to listen. Love to explore the unknown territories, to know and understand more. Now busy learning to unlearn. This is me in a nutshell.

101 thoughts on “Lamentation of a Loner”

  8. Aah that’s pretty wonderful. It’s follows a rhyme scheme so well that I was nearly amazed.
    This lonely bird will soon find its way since the earth still pocess a magnetic field and all what bird needs to do is to detect it. Rest physics will deal with.😂😂😂

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  10. The bird is no longer a loner…haahaa
    As i said in earlier posts your poetries are deep with meaningful insights aur yaha rhyme bhi is icing on cake.
    Loved reading it!!📝👏👏👌

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    1. You knw what, this was actually about a lonely bird outside my bedroom window, crying its heart out for his flock, it seemed like migratory bird to me on his way to some faraway land. And his cries were echoing in my ears for so many days after that. And then this poem happened just all of a sudden as soon as I woke up from my sleep and wrote this in less than 5 mints flat. I swear this is the original draft I made, and rhyming just happened along. I am so glad u liked it, for this was my raw work, no editing, no polishing nothing. This response made my day. Thanks mon ami for that. 😍😋

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      1. See this is called magic when one can really feel the nature and poetry happens. The other day i was talking about taking the inspiration from nature and here you inspired me. If this is raw work, i can imagine what would be the standards of your final draft…
        Its all my pleasure that i encountered a beautiful writer here.
        Keep writing!😊

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      2. Thanks for the constant support and i mean it from the bottom of my heart .. yes I intend to keep writing as that is the only outlet I have where each time I gain more than I give……

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  11. Now I have started lamenting,how come I did not land in this web post earlier !
    Anamika ji, I am lifting my hat higher and higher and you know, it touched the ceiling.
    Now I feel sad and lonely( from the WP community) because I missed out this great heartfelt poetry.
    Now I am feeling I am the bird after reading this wonderful penning, but I wish I were not the bird.
    Thank you for the great write and share.

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    1. Haha…you are surely not that lonely bird for you have flock here with you in WordPress. At least you have us to share your thoughts with.
      Wah ji..aap tho sach mein poems enjoy karne lage…
      Time kadachuda ungalukku innaikku. Apo Almighty kitte vendunadhu veena pogalai.
      Day over aa?
      Dinner koode lunch madhiri late aa?
      Thank you Sridhar ji for the effort you are taking inspite of your time constraints.

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      1. Thanks again.Khana abhi complete kiya.Merci for the kind enquiries.Sanivaar poora aap ghara me hi rahhte hain shaayad.

        Me even having a glance at poetry stuff…Oh credit goes to you..
        As I say time and again it is iretesting and fun to interact with you and your way of replying makes our heavy day lighter.Many times I notice smile on my face and sometimes I laugh loudly pett bharke.
        Addiction is not a good habit ,but it is ok if it is for a good reason.Here I am getting addicted to your style of interaction u do with your readers.
        Day is getting over I feel sad.But new day is going to come.I feel elated…..That too being Sunday.
        Enough of my boring story.
        GN.Kal mileage Insha Allah courtesy WP.

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      4. Humne aapka dhin aur dil halka kiya, yehi hamare liye kaafhi hein sukhoon ki neendh sone ke liye.
        If I could lighten up your day with nothing much but my interactions then I am delighted to do so on a daily basis.. .if it makes you forget your surroundings and make you laugh out your heart, then I would gladly continue this chitter chatter with you every single day just to see you laugh out…phet bhar ke
        thank you ji for all the good words of yours. And a good day has ended so be glad of this day and a new dawn awaits us tomorrow so in the anticipation of a beautiful day let’s bid Adieu…
        Good night Sridhar ji. May you be blessed with a peaceful sleep.

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      1. Thank you ji.Back home.Just now going to have dinner.
        Sure..time time say GN and the day ended reading your birds lament,with a satisfied note that ….Iam here to enjoy your poetry..From bottom of my heart…You should make a serious attempt to have your lovely collections publishedvover the time, of course.Have a great Sunday,but do drop about your achievemets for tomorrow.Waiting to hear.Merci.

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  12. I am glad, I met you Sridhar ji in WordPress…
    Will drop in sure tomorrow with tmrrw’s daily quota of music and waiting for yours too.
    Take good care of yourself Sridhar ji. I am glad I could bring in interest of poetry in you even if it is little. But I am sure you will fall in love with poems very soon.

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      2. Aaj tho it looks like I am delaying your folding in to the bed. So let me just scoot u off to your sleep time. Jao jaake sojawo.
        See you tmrrw …Good night and sweet dreams. Freud wala.dreams. 😁

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      2. Haha…How in the world you managed to do this. 😁. That’s the sweetest gesture you just did. Thank you ji. Yes some more clarification and clue leading discussion tmrrw…to be contd.
        But seriously what you did is really cute. I love Disney and Tom &Jerry.
        Uhmm. Olunga poyi thoongunge. You are only permitted to like this commemt and respond tmrrw morning. Ok va.

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      4. Good Sunday Noon Monsieur,
        You gave me this song, I think two days back. But …it’s alright, if you want me to hear it one more time, this time with more intensity.. .sure deal. After all it’s a beautiful song by Foreigner .
        Glad neenge nalla thoongininge. So back to duty tdy?
        Too early to ask abt ur lunch and too late to discuss breakfast.. ..if u were at home, it could have been a lavish Brunch.
        Ok without wasting much time here is the song of the day.
        Richard Marx…Right here waitng for you.
        Kettrikkingla nu theriyale but manam mayakkum melody…
        I enjoy other language (common lang for u and me) songs too. You can shift the gear over to there if you want.
        Enjoy your day Sridhar ji…

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      5. Thank you Ma’am .This song I know but I listen again .This guy has a soft and melodious voice.Looks like you love the oldies say 70 s and 80 s.Syncs with my taste.No need to change the gear of course if you permit.One thing I want to know why you are so kind to reply to each response from your followers ? What about trolls? You get depressed or you become stronger ? I know that you are the strongest but I am Curious as to how you manage…..as you know trolls derive pleasure from your so called weakness.Merci

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      6. Haan some times I feel the feel.Music had then in 70’s, 80’s and even 90’s is not much seen in now a day’s music. Those times music had soul in it. I am not saying all the songs are bad now a days there are a few good ones no doubt about it, but the old ones are still so pleasing to the ears.
        It will be a lie, if I say i answer every response. Sometimes i miss due to some reason.
        Trolls are common ,i heard but touch wood I have been spared except for one occasion when a non blogger commented on my constant writings of Melancholy, he felt it was depressing and he thought I was a hopeful person. Oru periya lecture koduthar comment box ile. Thank God, another non blogger counter attacked him very respectfully.
        So they kind of argued between each other.

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      7. Goodmorning Anamika ji.Appreciate taking your time inspite of tight schedule.

        True …that is why they say ‘Old is Gold’

        First of all I don’t know why somebody should gooo on arguing just because this person differs in her/his opinion about the post.Just say you differ or agree with the post…and just move on, instead of intimidation.
        I feel like just give a distant hug to these guys and just move on.
        Wishing a mesmerising Monday !

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      8. Ya seriously, we write what we feel..and I think as of now our constitution has not changed and freedom of speech and expression still is our right.
        I think these people try to thrust down their opinion on us..like you said, say what you feel and move on…what is the point in clinging on.
        Probably they have not heard about the term being diplomatic.
        Yes the famous Munnabhai’s trick kattupidi vaidhyam virtually might click. …kabhi try kiya hein in real life with ur patients… does it calm down them.

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      10. So so sorry Sridhar ji for the delay in reply. I was totally caught up tdy. Aha…Backstreet Boys, how could not one like this song of theirs. Heard it and reminded me of the late 90s. So how did your day go tdy.Hope, being Sunday, things were merciful to you.
        Reached home,? Ya abhi aur time bacha hein?

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      12. An absolute Good morning Sridhar ji….Have a fulfilling weak ahead.
        So glad to hear you had a full relaxing Sunday, you deserve it after all.
        Heard your song and as ever class lyrics and deep too. Thank you, you are introducing me to deep diving in the ocean.of music and I am simply loving it….
        Ok my part of the bargain deal for you tdy is
        If it is sadness in love then sometimes love itself doesn’t seem to be enough according to

        “Sometimes love ain’t enough by Patty Smyth and Don Henley”

        The explanation lyrics in this song is excellent too.
        You knw what Sridhar ji, sometimes i feel we are playing a mind game via this Antakshari like songs playing.. ..Are we?

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      13. I just completed listening to the song.
        Oh ! what a great song!.I love her voice,the song is from the bottom of her heart ( Now i think both singing a song & writing poetry are similar…has to come from the bottom of the heart).Many times they even make the audience cry….cry…and become more emotional. This particular song fits into this category.
        To be frank with you, earlier The bangles,and now this Patty smith both are fantastic and I heard for the first time.
        And in Patty Smyths words “But there’s a danger in loving somebody to much” is a bit scarry and one can be lost in the unknown world.
        From where on earth Aap ithne manpasand gaane pick up kar te hai ?.
        Roomba roomba HighRoyal taste !
        Pass on that magic wand to me without delay !
        Mind games… Any day you are a better player.You analyse every bit so well and so minutely.Merci

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      14. Glad you liked Patty Smiths voice and song and her soulful singing. Ya bangles song is one of my favorite too…this song I heard long time back…but stayed in my memory because of it’s simplicity and its catchy tune.
        Arre aap ke liye ghaana chun na itne aasaan nahi hein janab….especially you being so good at this. It some times take me hours trying to select and guess the songs you might not have heard. Dont you think its dangerous in loving somebody to much?

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      15. I did get your song and have seen the movie too considering that I am a movie buff too. Me before you too is a beautiful movie…it stays in your long after the watch and raises a few questions in your mind. If you haven’t watched that movie please do. ..for it’s simply marvelous and while you are at it try guesssing where have you seen the heroine of that movie …
        In the million of tiny drops in the ocean, some turns out to be pearl hidden in the oyster. And they are difficult to be ignored. I already told you i look forward for your witty replies and it’s hard to miss the energetic yin yang symbol of urs.
        And who can not like Ronan Keating and.this is one of my favourite songs of him. So i guess this is Good night time.

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      17. Are we not adhering to the deal already, was there anything else, if so help me to recollect ..yes thanks and sorry restricted, that too i remember. Kuch aur bhi tha kya?
        Haan haan….take your time. Aaram se watch.

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      11. Haha…you are a smooth talker aren’t you? Butter le knife vekkra madhiri nice and smooth.
        Oxford tho badi dhoor ki baath hein. .hum tehre bechare Indians, convent education se kaam chalana pada…baaki the world of the books educated and sailed me through. I was an avid reader from young and loved to have even i slept. And reading automatically raises your thirst to know more and learn more .

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      12. Ha ha Had heartful laugh for your comparison.
        Adada!Kadasile nelemai enna aayidichu paaruda!Anology paaru…Vennai and Katthie.Kadavule!
        Ok.So you are a self-made person and avid reader of Angreji Kitabs.
        Han…this is enough for me to learn more English through you and making me eligible to apply in international Universities.ok va?

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